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she plays the coquette (charcoal man and his lady)
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she plays the coquette (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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he totes that dress home in a paper poke she coos poke rattles in her hands sunshine yellow buttons for undoing twirlin’ skirt charcoal man knows what she likes somethin’ more bebette lady squeals bauble for her neck she leans in front of him fasten it for me I can’t get it to do he does her up arm around waist chuckle lips on hers charcoal man in Panama fresh shined feet calypso in lapel smellin’ of patchouli way he like to do lady in yellow dress pretty bauble sashayin’ her sassy self fais do-do music drivin’ pumping la-la dances her round like first time lady shines steps fresh charcoal man smokes cigar by the water eyes strolling skirts lady steps lively to another man’s dance laughing flaunting that yellow dress snapping amber eyes laugh showing milk teeth bauble reflecting off water black clouds paint themselves on sky storm brews takes her arm what you want yard dog make the misere bonne a rienne charcoal man grab bauble flings in water for gators lady says but you gone… his eyes stop her breath don get siddity wid me make me pass you slap, yea tu peux voir le chemin et t’en aller you can see the road go waves his arm at fais do-do laissez les bon temps rouler next dawning lady’s white arm sunrise bruise bauble gone cigar smoke gone lady’s heart just won’t beat right |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
cool nice one : ) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fickle, fickle.... gander and goose stories... Well done, Lady. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one..he don't strike me as the type to get the fury on..but she may be into spankin..enjoyed the snapshot ms |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Must just be the day...some aura in the air lingering over my heart, but Lady, I just don't want anymore "leaving". ahhhh just a sad day in my world. Make them happy for a bit, you can do it...after all, you are THE Lady! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
my first read of the "charcoal man" . . . made me smile because the charcoal man knows what she likes . . . clever dance of desire! Am now looking for more charcoal! Robert |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyKate~ You're publishing these, right ????? Breathtaking with each new read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh dear Lord Kate, you gotta turn this into a book. These are absolutely outstanding, and that man, what a rascal he is. Methinks, that lady, has him hooked!!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
glad you enjoyed it thank you Neotec… yes, fickle that’s what I thought too Karilea thank you… Stranger I don’t think he would ever hurt his lady he was just a little irritated left a good cigar to see to her and that yard dog… thank you LeeJ Sandra… your wish is my command I will make them happy…  Robert I am glad you enjoyed them thank you… I had not considered it Marge but I am now… thank you he truly is a rascal Gentle Spirit a rogue… he loves the lady for sure but will he ever settle down? thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It all depends that settlin' down for ther's sometin abou roaming 'round ask the bee then ask the bull somethin' of need somethin' of pull saw the bull keepin' kind to cow loss of bebe wouldn't leave, no how wrote the poem long gone some then eye the moment knowin' when... ~*~ tanks, Ladie.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love it Karilea.... thank you! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
So many I've read now..... and I am not sure if i missed any... WOW.... I will be collecting these up to read from one end to the other.... Like you're finished... NOT Some one said they'd pay money for something as great as this story is... I tend to agree.... glad instead that its free. Gotta go to bed now and try to unwrap myself from your web. In an earlier life, she could have been me.... and he was definitely one of my X's Can't wait to read more. Sherry |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Sherry... it's not over yet |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
guess he didn't like anyone messin' with his lady or her showin' off her baubles in front of him maybe. I knew he'd get her a bauble. A |
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