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quiet in the bayou (charcoal man and his lady)
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quiet in the bayou (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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dark night no moon ouaouaron making big croak in bayou screen door slip open quiet like shined leather feet slide on floor cigar smoke patchouli fill empty room lady’s heart listens dream sheet slips back bed creaks long legs creep in ‘tween hers brown fingers tangle in shadow hair miss me ma petite fille vilaine lady sighs ‘gator roars charcoal man slips lady little gris gris um hum |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sandra this one's for you... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Awwww! I'm almost glad to be awake at 3:00 am. This is so nice, the thought and the tale! Thank you!! Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
um-hummmm.... yes, that's about saying it all.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one when ol snakey does his mojo they say it makes the belly water boil makes the shiver skin giggle they say..dunno myselftho enjoyed it ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Robert  glad you enjoyed it Sandra  thank you Karilea  "dunno myselftho" um hum Stranger a real stranger might believe you… thank you... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I missed one in my absence and just found it! It's like finding the last candy bar and just cherishing each sweet bite. My day is now more happy. I love them and miss them, you know. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I'm glad you found it aziza I miss them badly... and I wonder how they're doing thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am SO hopeful we have not heard the end of them. Mayhaps a sequel? Yes? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
they still wander through sometimes Nancy but they haven't spoken yet... I hope thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well drat! I have gotten behind on this series since I left for Kansas so I will have to go through and get them all in order so I can maybe print them out to read when I'm away from the computer... that's a good thought yaknow? Make all of these into a book!! I'd sure buy one! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you passing shadows good to see you back … |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't believe DS any more than you. Well done Lady..a picturesque poem you gave us. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I don't believe DS any more than you that's because you're not a stranger Barry  thank you so much... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling and thinking about belly shivers gris gris |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
makes me smile too Kacy thanks.. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I miss them. um hum. |
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