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'bout food (charcoal man and his lady)
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'bout food (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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she sings la la la chicken neck on string cotton skimpy tucked in stepins mud between shell toes good catch in bucket hand grasps arm she smiles mudbugs for yo man beb? she nods twirling her pretty self round in the mud lady is small girl happy charcoal man knew her when she was little skinny she plumped sassy early he set his eye sit on yo man knee bebette tell him yo envie what you binhavin crave for lady pouts pretty fiddles with Panama top shirt button smiles in his face amber eyes each precise black eyelash shining warm smell of ripe tomato still in ground fais-do-do pretty dress music hmmm all dat? she twirls in cotton skimpy sweet legs flashing charcoal man laughs gon make crowder peas févi rice beb? she twirls again gon buy me dress? charcoal man gon eat good tonight |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
I dont know whether i should stop laughing or start clapping. I love your style and I love IT! <3 BK |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you BK...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She's such a pretty little thing, and he can't get her out of his blood. Smiling here.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ohhhhhhh yes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
grinz* ah yessss quietly asking for more, please... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Keep 'em comin', Lady Kate!!!  Loved it!  Linda |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kate The people and song they sing, each color so vibrant...love it!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
no he can’t do without her Karilea  thank you… thank you Helen… they’re not finished yet Gentle Spirit… Linda thank you…  thank you Martie glad you like them… |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Not only am I grateful for my suggested daily requirement of Charcoal man and his lady, but I have finally put their saga into their own little home (folder) on my desktop. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Sandra I'm glad you like them that much Kate |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, can see her lickin the end' of a sherpa soot makin it spitty ripe for ol panama to toke enjoyed it ms |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You have a style all your own! This one seems quaint to me, but fun in a rather sensuous way! Write on Dear LADY! David Every Day's a Blessing |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger I b’lieve she does help with his cigars least ways that's what I heard thank you thank you very much David |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
These are a delight! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you jo... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
only regrets when your poetry ends! ah, so good! so good! Robert |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Amazing writing. Loved this! ~Sunkissed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Robert I appreciate your reply… thank you so much Sunkissed… |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Honestly? I got kinda hungry. ... And, I love them! aziza |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Write on Lady...you're right on! Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I got hungry too Aziza love them crowder peas and mud bugs  thank you… thank you Enchantress… |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
think i was more hungry for that man. A |
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