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oola malla walla dalla (charcoal man and his lady)
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oola malla walla dalla (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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a reprise for my muse... twilight slips the bayou charcoal man sits on verandah back to railing chouchoot between his knees boy sees gator slidin’ by makes o mouth like his mama charcoal man nods that ol caimon think you sweet meat stay ‘way y’hear? keep yo fingers on yo hands screen door flaps open lady smiles on her men folk sits in rocker pushes back sweated hair fans herself chouchoot falters to her knee she lifts him fits his mouth to soft mound rocks across darkening light music flows oola malla walla dalla charcoal man stretches long legs adjusts shirt buttons feet move to music how long boy gonna do that bebette? he walkin’ chile now lady kisses fat cheek chouchoot gives up sleepy milky smile he my baby still gonna call him t’ char soon? charcoal man smiles pleased with himself turns in direction of music say loberta oh poor loberta girl you tell me where you been lady takes chouchoot to his bed kneels by her man kisses under ear sweet spot slips half moon fingers in his allons moustique wanta eat you leave nothing for me she slips screen door open quiet like finger to red lip shhhhh the chouchoot music is soft tipitina tra la la la whoa la la la-ah tra la la la charcoal man looks to Panama hanging on nail lady passes him pair of eyes she twirls her pretty self sauce picante lives in yonder now |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You capture such a good feeling here... The bayou, the sunset...well worn love. Such pleasures. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you TD... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my how I love these... Good to find another here this evening. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a pleasant surprise to find those two captivating southern souls coming to life once more!   Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhhhhh, good. I knew it wasn't quite over. A good love... is never over. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gotta give it to ya, you can spin a good story... |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Truly something special in your work. Loved this poem much!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Nancy I thought it was over but my muse wanted more I think it’s just a little peek Linda but who knows… oh so true Karilea! I hope he doesn’t start cutting up again… but you know what he’s like thank you so much Barry! thank you Kira… |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You treat us again, Lady! This could be a lifetime....a poem a week or a poem a month, keep it comin'. I see these folks.....encore, encore! *hugs*....jo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..lucky little sucker gets to have the candy and the gator tooth too enjoyed it ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I knew we would see our favorite couple back upon these pages of blue again someday Lady.....ah yes....the journey continues....Very nicely done, Kate.  |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you so much! The dreamer in me wants so to believe that there is a "happily ever after". |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i love your poetry i love the story romance goes on... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you jo I have missed them… Stranger you triflin’ rogue makin’ me laugh thank you… thank you Donna maybe they have become a happy couple still he seems a little restless… ah Sandra… I just HAD to see how they were doing thank you so much thank you Helen yes romance always goes on when all else is gone… |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
smiles ~ just smiles. |
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