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Open Poetry #39

The perfect woman

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-10-01 04:51 PM

Her perfect smile,
Only shadowed by
Her angelic eyes,

But they hide the truth,
Well enough for me to fall,
Only to repeat it again,

The scent of her body
Intoxicated me for a while,
Dripping heavenly signs,

But she disguised herself well,
Hiding her evil self,
Blinded by this, I craved,

Tone of her serene voice,
A musical melody,
That turns any frown to smile,

But her lips utter poison,
Seeping within my heart,
Turning me against myself,

Her touch can melt,
Even the coldest of heart,
Creating a garden of love,

But the way she touches me,
Pulling apart my soul,
Ending me seems to be her goal.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

william foos
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

1 posted 2006-10-02 12:19 PM

i think that they drink poison just because they can
great write love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

banished_fairy
Junior Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 31
Happy in H*ll, PA

2 posted 2006-10-02 03:53 PM

We all have fallen for the "wrong" person at one time or another. And to break away from their "charm" is one of the most difficult things to do. You are well on your way.
Beauty only gets you so far.
Nice work.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-10-02 07:43 PM

Perfect people are too often hung up on
their perfect selves.... Sad, society
and the universe are judged by looks..

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

4 posted 2006-10-02 11:50 PM

Excellent Poem.
I hope one day, i can define a woman in a way similar to that..i really liked it a lot.
i'll look for more of your poems and see what i can learn

Excellent Work.

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