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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2006-10-02 04:16 AM

To time this once was its place.
Lost somewhere deep in space.
But all the alignment, misaligned and left everything sort of out of taste.

To when and how and where and why.
the morning pondered in the sky,
Everything slowed as it went by.

But a small amount of what will be.
Determined by the moment chosen by me,
to be the one that involved, We.

A
Minor
Insignificance.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-10-02 06:57 AM

this is very inspiring Kellie!

I wish I had the time to sit here and write a poem of what this poem brought to my mind, but I have to get ready for work...I will be back tonight though!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2006-10-02 12:12 PM

Kellie,
I'm confessing I like this. I pray all is well with you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

3 posted 2006-10-02 02:33 PM

Oh, I do love the meter of this one.
And the style.

I am thinking of a poem now...thank you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-10-02 04:14 PM

Very nicely done Kellie!
It's so good to read you again.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest
smile~

banished_fairy
Junior Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 31
Happy in H*ll, PA

5 posted 2006-10-02 04:31 PM

I totally agree with Refugee. The meter and style are completely inspiring.

So, Thank You.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2006-10-02 04:44 PM

Dixie- Thank You! I would like to see the fruit that this poem brought to you please when you have a chance share it with us. Thank You so much.

Larry- All is very well with me. Still working for Penney's at the mall. Got a 25 cent raise yesterday. So I am doing quite well! Thank You.

Refugee- Thank You for your kind words. I am happy to know that this has inspired you to write as well, it was my goal for this to invoke thought. I would love to see what this brought to your mind.

Nancy- Thank You, this is just the beginning of what is to come from me. As I walk along a new path in life and find my way.

Banished Fairy- Thank You! And Pleasure to meet you as well! Welcome to piptalk!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-10-02 10:30 PM

beautifully done Kellie...

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

8 posted 2006-10-02 11:43 PM

Excellent Poem
I Really Like it.
The Love Idea Around it it's Just Great.
I hope that one day i can learn and write Something like that.

Good Work!

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