Open Poetry #39 |
Dance Of The Fairies |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
The Dance Of The Fairies There’s a wondrous secret hidden place that I like going to And if you’re very good my sweet I’ll share this place with you It’s half in light and half in dark between the night and day And if you’re very quiet you can watch the fairies play They gather in the twilight on the far side of the hill But if you want to see them, then you must be very still No noise or movement can you make for they are very shy And if they see you hiding there then far away they’ll fly I like to watch them dance and sing beneath the silver moon And listen as they play their flutes and blow a magic tune After they have played a while they all prepare to eat I watch as they prepare their meal so magical and sweet They gather stardust and moonlight and cook them in a stew And then they fill their tiny cups with early morning dew When they have finished dining they will start to play again And then my dear you’ll never guess what starts to happen then The fairies gather one and all and right before your eyes They'll zoom into the starlit night on golden fireflies Zipping back and forth they fly, racing with each other They dart along the hillside, first one and then another Chasing shooting stars they see throughout the moonlit night They sing and dance together until morning’s early light So if you’re good my darling child you soon will get a chance To come with me to a magic place and watch the fairies dance |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I love this, truley a wonder that only you could create. Beautiful, Love Jess |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Beautiful in every single way... Always a pleasure to read your work. ~Kira |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SAVED faster than you can say "fairy dust"! This is my cuppa a dew!!! With love from A Fan of your poetry ~ and fairies! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply enchanting!! This would make a great children's book. I'd love to see this with fairie graphics. I came looking for your work after reading your poem tonight and I must say I'm not disappointed. This kind of poetry rocks! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Steve, Beautifully written rhyme. "They'll zoom into the starlit night on golden fireflies" I love to watch fireflies and this poem is simply captivating. Poet deVine is right: would make a great children book. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree on the story...I enjoyed it, and I am way past being a kid....shhhhh, don't tell anyone. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you should be making these into books Steve! |
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