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The Dance
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The Dance |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Dance do not move you will break the moment did you like the dance there is a moment in time when the wind stirs the trees and song birds are in the sky there is music to face and I shall face mine “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Just lovely! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You always do, for good or ill....it's one of your most beautiful traits. One of..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"there is music to face and I shall face mine" Hoping it is a graceful composition, Helen, like this. *smile* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HelloSweetLady~ You do a touching word-twirl~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no need to move I enjoy the moment too much |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
an As Is moment... Lovely !!! You have a way of making a buck dancing buffoon want to waltz. :: bows :: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
there is a moment in time when the wind stirs the trees and song birds are in the sky Helen, this is just beautiful! Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Helen...so much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms helen your dances always move me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide, and here I was thinking, that I should just go outside and enjoy the day... I may not be dancing (yet) but on the inside I am--now. Thank you love.  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Enjoyed this poem, it has very powerful last two lines. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like that. There's buried treasure there. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
softly beautiful writing Helen, so good to read you again.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gracefully and perfectly said, Helen....I always love every one of your poems Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Helen, This is so stunning... just like everything else we have come to expect from you. It is writing like this that makes me glad to be back. You may burn my flag... only after you wrap yourself in it first. |
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