»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #39
»
Spirit of The Sea...(TD/Magnus Duet)
| Open Poetry #39 |
|
Spirit of The Sea...(TD/Magnus Duet) |
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
|
Spirit of the Sea My gaze upturned Seeing surface, sequined and still All that is left to me, floats, emotes Without body or mind, only wonder exists A capsule of breath, a locket of air Soul calls to soul A thimble filled of brine kept within the darkened depths as shimmering tendrils of time float lazily. Without body or mind, without darkness to fear...a locket of hair left lingering, dancing without a living desire. Soul calls to soul Seeking differently, the waves Lacquered up above me, rolling An endless ebb where desire wells Moving forward, unassuming as ecstasy Without body or mind, without touch or thought Moving to the unknown Soul calls to soul Left behind as the bounds of man become No more, as endless souls sink the blackened Depths into the chilled dampness where a Soul might rest. Delicately caught, the breath That rises from the core of earth, kept for The moment of lips brushing, souls flushing, Within the airless binds. Soul calls to soul And in the heartbeat of the sea We are answered |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Soul calls to soul And in the heartbeat of the sea We are answered" ~ I just emitted a soul sigh... You two du-et so well!  Linda |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus "And in the heartbeat of the sea We are answered" Well done. |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh soo beautiful you two! I love duets, please do-it duet again?? this ending? PERFECTION. |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It was Kay's craftiness in the ending..Yes, it is good... |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry and TD....you've captured the place where love can be held without skin, so beautifully!!! |
||
*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
What a beautiful duet! ~Alli~ |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, you are a gifted, talented arsenal of poetic beauty...a pleasure to work with in these little endeavors.... |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Soul calls to soul" Barry and TD it can't get better than this... beautiful |
||
|
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Stunning write from beginning to end! It lingers after the reading calling like soul to soul to be read again. |
||
|
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I think I could read this poem every day for a week, and take something new from it each time. Thank you both for this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
terrific piece!! I'm glad I didn't miss this one! |
||
|
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Stunning duet! Great job, you two! Yes!!! misce |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, it was a great duet, one that I very much enjoyed working with TD on...It was her inspiration and our labors that made it so. Thank You!!! |
||
|
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A great job on this. I love poems on the sea and this is a gem. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
