Open Poetry #39 |
Above The Rest {A Sunshine Duet} |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Above the Rest I could not e'en see them, but knew that they were there, yawning, biding lilac scent, so heavy in the air, hidden to dwell in a loving, special place to find memories streaming from recesses, deep within my mind. Lingering in some deep purplish, silk-like floating mist as if some harbored memory could, should still exist perhaps in some drawer of fantasy’s swift rewind memories streaming from recesses, deep within my mind. And suddenly wafts of thought, caught upon gentle breeze past purple moments now sought, reflections in reprise where yesterday, then the present, are truly entwined memories streaming from recesses, deep within my mind. Come, hyacinth, magnolia, love’s deep rose’d perfume make way for sheer lilac instant, caught now in full bloom for she is a moment with us, gone quick in some time memories streaming from recesses, deep within my mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It is good to see that two of our ladies have taken a moment from their hectic lives to gift us with such a pleasurable read. Contagious, isn't it? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. You two do well together. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delicate and delightful ladies... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna and Sissie....what a lovely mix of fregrance...you forgot the sweet pea though. Isn't it amazing how scent becomes such a strong memory it can bring back the meaning from the past. Beautiful beautiful!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
But of course this is a ~ I love lilacs and both of you! ~ A superbly crafted collaboration! Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, little one, for spending time on this, with me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you, each so much for stopping by to enjoy the scents with us! I grew up with lilacs surrounding me, and now have none near me but seeing this beautiful pic, and smelling them when I burn my favorite candle sure does give me that escape into yesterday, even if for just a lil while. MommaK? huggin you and whispering thank you.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava!! Breathtakingly beautiful! ~Hugs to you both~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, James, thank you both for peeking in. Hugs. |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
lilacs...yes, I can smell them now...they are one of my favorite flowers...next spring I'm planting a lilac bush in my garden of my new house... thank you,ladies, for awakening my senses |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, bring them all, bring all...and bring this poem back to the place where it belongs....Above The Rest. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a fine duet! two of my favorite ladies! I grew up with honeysuckle myself |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so much for looking into a few beautiful moments spent writing with Karilea, it was such a treasure to write this with her. Hugs, and much thanks to all. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honeysuckle is another favorite. Anything that pulls in the senses, should be written of, if for no other reason, to awaken the concrete walkers to what the country folk know of. Write, Poets. Write of what awakens memories, and lend your knowledge to those who never leave a screen. |
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