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Spike Daft
Junior Member

since 2006-09-12

Posts 23
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-09-25 11:37 PM

To be free
Is a lake of potent words
A lyric of trees, a sonnet of birds
To be free
is to gaze upon the sea
And rhyme the waves in time with me
To be free
Is to sing the songs of night
A song of peace, a song of flight
To be free
I gaze unto the shore
And weave my words forevermore

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-09-26 12:03 PM

ah...to be free indeed

beautiful

Tanpopo
New Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 8
New brunswick, Canada

2 posted 2006-09-26 01:12 AM

That was beautifully written, very good work.

"Today we are going to talk about boiling a frog"

"Just because humans live as though we are above the laws of nature, does not mean we are"

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-09-26 01:17 AM

You show us how lovely it is to be free.

Thank you.
aziza

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-09-26 09:20 AM

My spirit took flight over a sea sublime as I read your lyrical words in rhyme divine!

Thanks, I needed that!

To living life fancy free!
EA

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-09-26 10:29 PM

beautiful work Andrea...

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