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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-09-25 05:53 PM

Pull on baggy pants with fifteen pockets and chains,
Throw on a black metal band shirt not much remains.
Lace up black screw studded combat boots,
Tie hair back reflectiong ones roots.
Strap on bracelets - spiked, D-ringed and leather,
Hook on a spiked leather collar in any weather.
Step into the light of the night,
Where everything is a delight.
And now I feel your stare,
Piercing my back is your glare.
Everywhere I go all I hear is...
"Damn Creatures of the Night..."
Walk down the street with boots clacking,
Hear the sound of chains smacking.
Pants swish and sway with every step,
Hair bounces with attitude not pep.
Collar shining bright in the street lights,
Bracelets clinging sound like armor of knights.
I feel you looking out your windows
I hear all your innuendoes.
And all I ever hear is...
"Damn those Creatures of the Night..."
Stay awake till the break of dawn,
Awaiting the next night to spawn.
Think on intelectual levels with brains,
Sit out in the open devouring peace as it rains.
Not afraid to be,
We don't mind we'll let you see.
Just trying to exist,
What's next on your 'X' list?
Yet all we ever hear is...
"Damn Creatures of the Night!!"

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-09-25 07:37 PM

Yep, I think you are right...In my day,
it was Hippies and drugs, stuff like that.

Now, it can be a dozen different things..

To each his own...only fair. OH, good
write, you set the mood well.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-25 11:39 PM

"Toucha toucha toucha touch me, I wanna be dirty
Thrill me chill me fulfil me
Creature of the night"

...stolen from Susan Sarandon without her permission

sorry
I couldn't resist

I like the poem...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-09-26 12:02 PM

yeppers...I liked it too

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-09-26 02:40 AM

Haven't read your poetry for awhile, and have to tell you....this is one of your best!

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2006-09-26 03:38 AM

This Is a good write. Can't wait for more
Cheers,
Jess

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-09-26 08:44 AM

Good One! Enjoyed this, going back for another read.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-09-26 09:34 AM

Hot Flakes, this may be my favourite poem of yours that I have read to date!

Exceptionally descriptive and puts the reader in the skin of one of those "Creatures of the Night" ~ By the way, you captured me perfectly!

lol

Very well done!

EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-09-26 09:40 AM

Hi Kyle!
LOL&EarthAngel's response!
This is one of your best by far.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

9 posted 2006-09-26 09:54 AM

Mesmerizing.

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