Open Poetry #39 |
My Drummer |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
My drummer leads me in cadence, In solo tympani. My drummer marches me steady. In rhythmic dignity. My drummer keeps an even beat. Down lonely chosen road. My drummer beats, as does my heart In a loyal, loving mode. And if you wish to march beside me. Then take hold of my hand. And follow my drummer as he guides me. In my lone-life marching band. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Takes your hand and marches at your side :: Know what? Your poetry rings special to me. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sandra this one beats my heart yours too I guess... I like it |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you Aziza and Lady. Much sweeter words when they come from those you admire. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Refreshing in it's simplicity, unique in it's delivery. Nice write. TD |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, TD. Very much. |
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MukkaKukka Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88Finland |
The drums give the feeling of something concrete, they keep the song from flying into foreign speheres. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I too like the delivery of this poem. Nice write, I must say. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
My most sincere thanks to all of you for your time. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so honest, so confident... a very real up close and personal walk wonderful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Seraphin, may you forever march to the magnificent beat of your own drum! I do so enjoy your poetry! Loving Light, EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OHHH....I like, very very much....Nicely done!!! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thanks to all of you, also, for the read. |
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