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yellow I believe (duet with Dominique Simone)
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yellow I believe (duet with Dominique Simone) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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while I sat here alone a quick flash bright color yellow I believe spoke your name landed on my palm with angora wings delicately searching until now I knew no other way misplaced on god’s tongue no feel no beginning no end waiting to be thrust to the place I belong then your name spoke itself in yellow |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely captivating! A moment of sudden awareness, rendered in beautiful poetic language. My compliments to both! Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Margherita... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Page Monklet... thank you for your words you amaze me always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome duet! and I think the shortest one I've ever read too...a great blending! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James thank you so much Dixie  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments. And thank you lady for your wonderful words. without you could this poem could not have been, nor could I have been a poet at all. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you give me too much credit Monklet now I have to go spend it Hollister maybe? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Short, but oh so sweet! Thanks to you both for this poetic treat!  Loving Light, EA  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your sweet reply Angel...  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Yes thank you Angel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone and dom, a pleasure to see you two entwined in wordspeak, D |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am glad you enjoyed this moment Stranger thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ladies...this was a delight to read...thank you!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your comment Martie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What an exquisite write! Brava to both of you! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Nancy hugs |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Powerful.. yet 0h, so elegant! Much enjoyed. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Kenneth |
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