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A Visit with You
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A Visit with You |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A Visit with You What warm amber flickers within your heart this evening? Mere thoughts? Or, reflection of the depths of the deepest of seas? What profound sentence will you prescribe tomorrow? One, which sets the world on fire desiring adamantly with a hunger to taste every word? Or, Will your shyness hinder your thoughts into censor? Are you that morning dove cooing and praising the rising sun; blessing a new day of life and living? Or, are you an eagle soaring high above the snowy mountaintops, surveying God’s gift to you? What ever your contemplation, wherever you may go in your heart and mind allow me a visit there too. Write your poetry, and invite me in to marvel at your thoughts and to visit and read with you… ---------------------------------------------------  |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Write your poetry, and invite me in to marvel at your thoughts and to visit and read with you… Siyo JL how truly beautiful your words,they allow one the dream,the light,the seeking,and the finding all tie together in flights of hope! my heart thanks you!
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and into the great depth of sea, azure paintings dripping wet with life, adoration for life...remains forever, to testify a great hallmark, whispering sea breeze sunrises, and sunsets to participate the inbetween of some great mystic...can you feel it, know it, breath it...life's greatness intermingles deep within Beautiful poem JL, rocks me like soft tides that be...forever...a recipe for the soul to smile Are you that morning dove cooing and praising the rising sun; blessing a new day of life and living? yes....praising every incredible moment...of each and every day... Your a pleasure to read Hugs Lee J. [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-04-2007 07:00 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my...  ...the questions you pose!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly how I feel... you just said it so much better! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow!! What a wonderful read to start my day today! This is excellent! TD |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write! Write on!  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL, I do believe that this may be my personal favourite of the poems of yours that I have had the privilege of reading! ~ A pure and poetic expression of respect and appreciation. Beautifully scribed from your loving spirit.  I'm going back to enjoy a second read-through! Warm hug 'n a smile, EA |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Exquisite! The structure was so strange, and yet it worked perfectly. It gave the whole thing a very fresh, original feel. And it was just bursting with beautiful ideas and images. I think I'll need to read this one a few times till it really sinks in, but anyway, I'm immensely impressed. They aren't flaps; they're my face! |
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