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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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This morning’s sky was blazing a canopy of ochre mood like an untamed heart, watering thought-provoking kernels muscular, intellectual keenness, leaving me trembling with its shock of immeasurable deepness taking possession, like a moon path of loving arms stretching to some great horizon, dancing braless like a winged creature in arrogant flight peeling souls of unbelievers into moonlighted crystalline drawing closer still, insistent amethyst vapors melting into sounds deep as any soul could fathom and still believe composing some semblance of godly art and I thought, “am I lost inside some megalithic city?” "probably not!", but for this time, I shall wallow in this inner water-front of timeless courtyards strewn like mangroves across the continent of my very small life verdant beliefs, like springs of fresh water maligning with this village of morning, rhythmically neighboring my soul I am wrought in this condition of balsamic persuasion and would take in any combination the slightest promise of it’s human part, even if great drowsiness consumed me again I was swept into a heart of oblivion for a moment where theory lights seemed a bit insane and in that moment, of full radiance, I was again, in deepest sleep in a moon pool of luminescence tentacles of heaven pulsed through some levitated music, that brought tears of joy to my eyes (sigh) how could anyone not know of love? great faith leaped circles around me… consciousness returned much to my dismay, my weakness leaned toward the now yet to be’s [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-02-2007 12:16 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You are so language rich!!! "I shall wallow in this inner water-front of timeless courtyards strewn like mangroves across the continent of my very small life" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Dear sweety, reading you is like jumping into a large box of jelly beans, where you always get a soft fall and a sweet taste in your mouth.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your words never cease to thrill and amaze me. Brava! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"intellectual keenness, leaving me trembling with its shock of immeasurable deepness taking possession, like a moon path of loving arms stretching to some great horizon, dancing braless " Your poetry just gets better and better. Just like you!! Beautiful write Lee J. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I agree with Martie language rich and not stingy with your words amazing work |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Language rich, mentally capable of escape.... into forever. You inspire. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Epic...and alarmingly good. I particularly loved these lines: "insistent amethyst vapors melting into sounds deep as any soul could fathom" I think these held a touch of something sublime. You truly are a magical poet |
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