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in the beginning (the michael poems)
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in the beginning (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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in the beginning there was lilac the smell of lavender and then there was sage sea mist linking colors and smells fractals back back to seahorse blush to moments when waves wore at time he sat waited watched blue denim water wash itself over him listened to the overcome of name that wanted to know him wanted to sing in his heart light skipped white froth green eyes met his spoke and neither turned away |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Loved this one, Lady!! So pretty. Hugs, Ethel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Ethel thank you so much hugs to you... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, nice work here |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kate.... very nice RDB |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a moment! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ thank you kindly thank you Roniece Interloper yes Dixie it sure was thank you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my. I inhaled this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Nan! what a nice thing to say thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have known moments such as this Kate.... thank you dear one for reminding me of such a beautiful moment.... and hey, just how did you know my eyes are green. Love this, lady. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James... ah gentle Donna I know all and see all and we are sisters under the skin  loved the garlic bread thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now look at you... a new series. Am I proud or WHAT!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My oh my...there has to be more to come. Sing in me muse... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
light skipped white froth green eyes met his spoke and neither turned away Siyo my Lady/sister I can not say I understand the poems of love,though there have at times been the wondering what would it be like,this tells me perhaps there is something to this thing call love? I do like well the soft sweetness it promises!
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Karilea I hope I do you proud thank you my friend oh yes Nancy so much more to come Siyo Granny yes there is more to love than tongues can ever tell thank you... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am already hooked. Thank you for the gifts you write. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for reading and for your kind words aziza big hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I smell roses. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Sir Sy! do you tell fortunes? amazing yes purple roses! thank you... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there was not one sentence I could highlight, as each and every word complimented the next and the next after that...wonderful story and read...thank you for sharing. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
LeeJ thank you so much! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I am going to have to go back read them all, Kate. Your work really impresses me. You have such an original flair to your writing. ...jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you jo I appreciate you so much |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"linking colors and smells fractals back back to seahorse blush" Your writing is so vibrant and I adore the many hues you weave into your pieces. (fractals - WOW - I love this word describing irregular curves or shapes) I am so glad I came in search to read the beginning of "the michael poems," for they are a treasure to savor. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Janette for doing me this honor I love fractals... they amaze me and sometimes seem to express just what I mean |
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