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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-12-28 01:22 AM



in the beginning
there was lilac  
the smell of lavender  
and then there was sage
sea mist
linking colors and smells  
fractals
back
back to seahorse blush
to moments when waves
wore at time

he sat
waited
watched blue denim water
wash itself over him
listened to the overcome
of name
that wanted to know him
wanted to sing in his heart

light skipped white froth
green eyes met his
spoke
and neither

turned away


© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2006-12-28 02:11 AM


Loved this one, Lady!!
So pretty.
Hugs,
Ethel

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-28 02:13 AM



oh Ethel
thank you so much

hugs to you...

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-12-28 04:27 AM


ladyone, nice work here
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-28 07:30 AM


Kate.... very nice   RDB
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-12-28 09:16 AM


1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-12-28 12:12 PM


what a moment!
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-12-28 02:06 PM




Stranger darlin’  
thank you kindly

thank you Roniece

Interloper
  

yes Dixie  
it sure was  
thank you

Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2006-12-28 02:30 PM


Oh my.  I inhaled this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-12-28 02:32 PM



oh Nan!
what a nice thing to say
thank you

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-12-28 04:53 PM


Lovely...James
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2006-12-28 04:54 PM


Lovely...James
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12 posted 2006-12-28 05:00 PM


I have known moments such as this Kate....

thank you dear one for reminding me of such a beautiful moment....

and hey, just how did you know my eyes are green.

Love this, lady.

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-12-28 05:07 PM



thank you James...

ah gentle Donna
I know all and see all

and we are sisters under the skin

loved the garlic bread
thank you

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2006-12-28 07:13 PM


Now look at you...

a new series.  Am I proud
or WHAT!




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15 posted 2006-12-28 08:02 PM


My oh my...there has to be more to come.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

wredgranny
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16 posted 2006-12-28 08:03 PM


light skipped white froth
green eyes met his
spoke
and neither

turned away


Siyo my Lady/sister I can not say I understand the poems of love,though there have at times been the wondering what would it be like,this tells me perhaps there is something to this thing call love? I do like well the soft sweetness it promises!


  granny!

The Lady
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17 posted 2006-12-28 08:34 PM



oh Karilea
I hope I do you proud
thank you
my friend

oh yes Nancy  
so much more to come



Siyo Granny  
yes
there is more to love
than tongues can ever tell
thank you...


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18 posted 2007-01-01 11:27 PM


I am already hooked.
Thank you for the gifts you write.

Alison

The Lady
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19 posted 2007-01-02 12:32 PM



thank you for reading
and for your kind words aziza
big hugs


Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2007-01-02 09:18 PM


Lady
I smell roses.

The Lady
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21 posted 2007-01-02 09:21 PM



oh Sir Sy!
do you tell fortunes?
amazing
yes purple roses!

thank you...

LeeJ
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22 posted 2007-01-03 07:09 AM


there was not one sentence I could highlight, as each and every word complimented the next and the next after that...wonderful story and read...thank you for sharing.
The Lady
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23 posted 2007-01-03 10:49 PM




LeeJ
thank you so much!


iliana
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24 posted 2007-03-03 11:50 PM


I am going to have to go back read them all, Kate.  Your work really impresses me.  You have such an original flair to your writing.   ...jo
The Lady
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25 posted 2007-03-04 12:00 PM



thank you jo
I appreciate you
so much

Janette
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26 posted 2007-03-04 10:37 AM


"linking colors and smells  
fractals
back
back to seahorse blush"

Your writing is so vibrant and I adore the many hues you weave into your pieces.
(fractals - WOW - I love this word describing irregular curves or shapes)

I am so glad I came in search to read the beginning of "the michael poems," for they are a treasure to savor.  

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

The Lady
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27 posted 2007-03-04 12:23 PM




thank you so much Janette
for doing me this honor

I love fractals... they amaze me and sometimes seem to express just what I mean

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