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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-25 06:26 AM

                "My Beloved"

   Arise, fair Wind. Stir the hair of an Angel.

   Alight, great Moon. Pale at beauty personified below.

   Come, undulating waves. Crest and bow at the feet of a Princess  most divine.

   Dance in the heavens, oh starry delights, to celebrate the joy and glory of souls united in love.

   You, who are majestic on high, look now and behold.

   I present my Beloved, whom I adore in all ways... for always:

   my Beloved, whom I more than love with all my heart and soul,

   my Beloved, with whom God Almighty has blessed me to make my soul complete...

   the better half of me... my Beloved Soulmate.

[This message has been edited by MoonShadow (12-25-2006 09:03 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-12-25 06:06 PM

nicely expressed~

M

kaila
Junior Member

since 2006-12-24

Posts 37
PA

2 posted 2006-12-25 08:50 PM

I enjoyed the uplifting spirit of your words.

I do believe, though, that an occasional "who" needs to be a "whom."

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2006-12-26 12:14 PM

We should all be so lucky
nice to have one to be so fond of
well done
Rich

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-12-26 05:09 PM

Yumm...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-12-26 11:01 PM

perfectly exquisite MoonShadow
my kind of poem

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-27 03:18 AM

wonderfully penned

RDB

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-12-27 11:24 AM

BRAVO!
Well done, Ken!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-12-27 11:29 AM

Very nicely penned Ken!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2007-01-03 04:07 PM

   Thank you, kind poets, for your response and comments warm and inspire the soul.

             MoonShadow

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