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"The shark"
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"The shark" |
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Eli Junior Member
since 2006-12-23
Posts 10 |
"The shark" She rips, she tears like a shark It hurts it has wonded me I bleed from my torn heart Im dieing on the inside. Why oh why does she do it She knows it hurts I sit on my chair wishing i knew why. The first blow was the last one Anything after that was hiting an empty shell But it still hurt, hurt more than she will ever know I just wish it would all go away so i could be happy again. Will it ever go? only time will tell but how long will it be How long till she realises what she has done How much i want to hide from it all |
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TheUnlabelled New Member
since 2006-12-25
Posts 9 |
Wow. really good! simple but gets to the point. Keep writing, you're a talented little poet. [[TheUnlabelled]] |
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