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Eli Junior Member
since 2006-12-23
Posts 10 |
"Feelings" Im hurting on the inside I dont know why but it hurts The feeling of tears always right there Waiting wanting to come out I tell them "no" they go away. Im still here wondering why Why me what have i ever done Was it that time in my life when i went or the track? Was it when i was mean to her? All i want is to be happy like i used to be. Will i ever be happy again Does fun even have a meaning to me anymore These feelings are always here and i can never get rid of them Alwas taunting me as if i were just fun to them But fun, fun isnt something i have experienced in a long time. The front is always up i look happy But really im not im dead Dead to the world and the world dead to me When, why, who These are the questions i ask my self But i can not answer them. No one can only i can answer my questions But i have to learn, learn how to before anything gets answered Untill that time i will walk around with a fake smile A fake laugh that are not me and or mine. |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
poignant; and I sympathise totally with the sentiments. It made me a bit sad. Good work anyway, hope you get your real smile back soon |
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TheUnlabelled New Member
since 2006-12-25
Posts 9 |
I really like your poems! Gosh. ^_^. Good work, yet again. yes, quite sad, but what isn't...? |
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