Open Poetry #39 |
You made me |
spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
You Made Me You made me More than I am With your love I know where I stand You made me Reach deep inside Look with wonder In you I confide You made me Feel life again Wanting to hold you My lover my friend You made me Pick up this pen Writing the words I need you again You made me Wish all these thoughts I miss you my baby Without you I’m naught You made me More than I am Now help me become That which you Depend To guide to follow To want me again |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No one can make you more than you are-- and no one can make you less. You told me that a long time ago--remember? (I'm willing to bet that you don't. ) Right now, I'm just proud to know you--you always did do the right thing. Friends forever lovie. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Richard... your words speak volumes... be well my friend RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! I agree with K here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Unless this is addressed to God himself...there is no one else on the face of this earth who can make or break your character (pretty much a difficult task to ask of someone)...YOU are the one who accomplished the task, from the soul and in the spirit, you are your own best friend...teacher, maker of good things.. Congratulations....wishing you much more sucess!!! but a wonderful write, thank you for sharing...hugs Lee J. |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
sometimes we're inspired by things even if we don't try to be. Thinking being made is inspired to go forth not broken. appreciate the kind words Rich |
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