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spiked4
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since 2006-12-07
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0 posted 2006-12-19 01:29 AM


You Made Me


You made me
More than I am
With your love
I know where I stand
You made me
Reach deep inside
Look with wonder
In you I confide
You made me
Feel life again
Wanting to hold you
My lover my friend
You made me
Pick up this pen
Writing the words
I need you again
You made me
Wish all these thoughts
I miss you my baby
Without you I’m naught
You made me
More than I am
Now help me become
That which you Depend
To guide to follow
To want me again



© Copyright 2006 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-12-19 01:37 AM


No one can make you more than you are--

and no one can make you less.

You told me that a long time ago--remember?

(I'm willing to bet that you don't. )



Right now, I'm just proud to know you--you always did do the right thing.

Friends forever lovie.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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2 posted 2006-12-19 02:54 AM


Richard... your words speak volumes... be well my friend  RDB
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-12-19 07:32 AM


excellent! I agree with K here
LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-12-19 07:44 AM


Unless this is addressed to God himself...there is no one else on the face of this earth who can make or break your character (pretty much a difficult task to ask of someone)...YOU are the one who accomplished the task, from the soul and in the spirit, you are your own best friend...teacher, maker of good things..
Congratulations....wishing you much more sucess!!!

but a wonderful write, thank you for sharing...hugs Lee J.

spiked4
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since 2006-12-07
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5 posted 2006-12-19 10:27 PM


sometimes we're inspired by things even if we don't try to be. Thinking being made is inspired to go forth not broken. appreciate the kind words
Rich

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