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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Would you believe me if I said I’d never been in any hills, up any mountains, or down in any valleys just so you’d go there with me and green— now fallen, but the ever now burning lonesome in-scent Might feel a bayou away from deep— now winterin’, but the sand now castlin’ some where in-season if my tongue danced around a fire without any accent you'd sense me a liar |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
NEVAH! Nevah.....nevah..... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
i really liked this poem. i thought you did a outstanding job. im saving this for my own reasons. thank you for sharing this poem |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Regina... I like your words! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'd believe you, just because you said it  so good to read you! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they say the quiet is so loud in secret places words would not be heard anyway..nice stuff ms |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Barry: Thank you darlin'.  True: You're so welcome, and thank you for reading and the save, kind sir. RDB: I like yours. Warmest thanks. Dixie: Aww, thanks hon. I'm too loud n proud to be anything othah than southern. D: Exactly. But there is feel-appeal. You're so incite-ful, dearest D. Lovins. peace and poetry, Reg |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply stunning |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, "if my tongue danced around a fire without any accent" If you did that I'd have to believe you! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words flow in a way that feels like a brook flowing with many twists and turns...well done...I like the different vision this poem gave me...**BIG HUGS** |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't got no accent hyar 'bout. Come to think on it, no grammar either  Loved it, Regina! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I'd believe anything you asked me to. Especially if you wrote it as pretty as this one.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somewhere, sometime, I must have said, let me write like her... and I know for sure I've said Welcome home! So here's to both. Clink! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
any time, reg - i'll give you a tour of the rockies. well penned - as i remember is always the case with you. very good to read your words again.  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
LeeJ: Yes, you are. Thank you for you. Larry: That's right, hon. Trust me. Haha huggins. Startime55: Thank you, deeply for the visit and for feeling that way. Big Hugs Back! Interlover: Ah ha! Your second stanza consists of "either," which if you were a true hick, "neither" would be the selection for a double negative. Thus, I find you intelligent and mostly correct on your grammer. uh grammar. Lovin's! Nan: Aww, thank you for your sweetest reply. Big holiday huggins. Sunnyone: Your welcome is as fresh and warm as holiday bread. You are poetry, my poetessa. Nevah forget that, no matter where I roam or if I foam at the mouth..haha. Your pen is mighty. Big lovin's. Christopher: Hey there, hi there, go there? Okay, hon. Be there with my boots on. Thank you so much and great to see you. Warm hugs. peace and poetry, Reg |
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