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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-12-16 06:09 PM



Luxury (Alive In A Dream)

I wish in the arms of
her I was there,
close enough to touch
her soft silky hair.
Looking into her lovely eyes,
alas I await beneath
warm Hawaiian skies,
within the caress
of the Honolulu moon
in remembrance of her promise
to be home soon.
Me and my heart
choosing to believe
in the hopes and desires
of my sweetheart and me.
Alive in the dream
of a lovers luxury.

JamesLee
16December
2006


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trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2006-12-16 06:28 PM


very nice James. Wish I was under the Honolulu moon. I love Hawaii

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2 posted 2006-12-16 06:40 PM


lovely write JamesM

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3 posted 2006-12-16 09:09 PM


very nice James
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-17 12:53 PM


James... I enjoyed this write of yours.. RDB
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5 posted 2006-12-17 01:04 AM


beautiful!
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