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Cast Away
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Cast Away |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Cast Away You still light softly upon my heart and cast away the darkness there, though we have grown farther apart, neither one much worse for wear. I still smile when I lay down to sleep, finding comfort in what used to be, and knowing that somewhere deep you still smile and dream of me. I still adore you after all these years, remembering youth long passed away, darkness will never entertain my fears, you still light and cast away. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
This is so delicate and poignant. It's like a butterfly that alights on your heart and swiftly flutters away. Nice job. Bea Grandma Bea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
couldn't say it any better then Beautrice... Ditto... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was so touching Hope |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dixie, this is a side of you that is very pleasurable to see, read and absorb. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely reflection on what was...and in part still is.  Sing in me muse... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Have to agree with all the comments here. Nicely done. I enjoyed the read (: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
some things remain dear to us forever Dixie as they should well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww...thanks guys  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah this is lovely!! enjoyed the read.. RDB |
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