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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-12-16 05:57 PM



There You Go

"I remember the day I realized that I
needed someone...the day that I met you."

I could have just said no
when she introduced herself.

No wait, I couldn't have
said that, if for no other
reason than I liked her voice.

Her voice seemed so soothing,
and I was in need of a soothe.

There you go, thats what I get
for being so needy.

JamesLee
15December
2006



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-12-16 06:42 PM


~Smiling~ at you...I like this one because I can  relate...

M

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-12-16 11:22 PM



Awww James
this is so good...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2006-12-17 12:52 PM


James... we are all in need of a good 'soothe'  - liked your words here my friend...  RDB
passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-12-17 01:07 AM


being needy isn't so bad...we all are at some time
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