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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-27 05:38 PM



No Way To Live (Thoughts of Her)


After she was gone
I was thinking,
how hard it must
have been for her
to be with me.
Me always in want
of more than she was
willing to give.
Thats no way
for either of
us to live.


JamesLee
29May
2006
Thoughts of her
from the past.


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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-10-27 05:56 PM


Sad but true.
Well done, James.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-10-27 05:57 PM


If only we knew then what we know now.
Good write James. hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-10-27 06:59 PM


A tender self-assessment.
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florida
4 posted 2006-12-15 11:16 PM


James, You already know what some people never know as long as they live.

Great write.

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displaced
5 posted 2006-12-15 11:18 PM


very true, and tender
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6 posted 2006-12-16 01:12 PM


nicely done james
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-12-16 11:37 PM



well done James...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2006-12-17 12:50 PM


Jemes... sad but very true words spoken here!  enjoyed RDB
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