Open Poetry #39 |
random dots |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
random dots pressed to paper form a pattern against their will it began irregular came together yes there is order even in madness it can be fit together in a way that is pleasing love opens time and space differently from measurable time and space I find myself wrapped in a blanket of anyseem tiny holes thread with gold fingers swimming among themselves eyes tracking copper moon beyond the far shore tried in the flame of desire I wake in your dream warm myself by the fire of your face a face of random dots pressed to paper |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful madness it is! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Dixie! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone I enjoy you mad...and this too |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"random dots pressed to paper form a pattern against their will"... Each, a stolen moment, reproduced before fate. Inspiring opener here, dear Lady! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ I go mad quite often glad you like it and this too thank you so much TD |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah you gotta love those random dots! a very nice write here! RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Roniece! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
I wake in your dream warm myself by the fire of your face Lovely, simply lovely. The way you write, Milady... strokes the soul with wonderful words weaved with the hand of the heart. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you gentle Sir MoonShadow dreams are very special for me |
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