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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-12-09 10:50 PM


when you stand at the cold french windows
candle light shining over and over  
in each tiny pane  
look in the snow shadows  
beyond blue  
tell me if my angels are lying there
  
you will know them

fair haired
rose cheeked
sweet limbed  
boy  
just on the eve of manhood
  
and my  
tiny boy child  
black soft of almost hair    
at the dawn of birth  

if you see them call me quickly  
for this mother’s heart craves
one last earthly glimpse
  
of her angels  

[This message has been edited by The Lady (12-11-2006 01:16 AM).]

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passing shadows
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The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-09 10:55 PM



thank you Dixie

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-12-10 08:10 PM


Lady
I always listen to a heart that speaks.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-12-11 01:17 AM



thank you Sir Sy


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-12-11 07:03 AM


ladyone, your soft side is lovely
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2006-12-11 07:05 AM


Kate this is lovely  .... RDB
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-12-11 09:31 AM


Lady Kate, ye pen heavenly with thy feathered quill.

Loving hug 'n smile,

Linda

Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-12-11 09:34 AM


...

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Martie
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9 posted 2006-12-11 01:39 PM


words just don't work


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2006-12-11 01:54 PM


1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2006-12-11 04:51 PM


Your heart speak is lovely here Kate.
Much enjoyed this.

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-12-11 10:12 PM



thank you all so much
there are times when the memories of my sons
sing to me
very loudly...

Angel4aKing
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13 posted 2006-12-12 08:36 PM


i have been without my "angels" for about 6 years....this really hit home..thank you...

~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
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14 posted 2006-12-13 11:38 PM



thank you Angel


MoonShadow
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15 posted 2007-03-18 07:26 PM


Too beautiful for mere words... in humble respone would you instead settle for a warm spirit hug? Thank you for sharing, Kate.

             MoonShadow
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The Lady
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16 posted 2007-03-18 10:29 PM




and thank you for listening Ken
a spirit hug is perfect

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