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Peaceful at Last!
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Peaceful at Last! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA 
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Peaceful at Last! The mists of early morning cover the mountianside,the birds all are stirring you can hear their morning prayers. The sun is slowly rising a brandnew day is born,the water from the mountian stream sparkles in the early morning light. Stars are slowly fading as midnight turns to light blue,the peaceful quiet of the night is disturbed as the world awakes. Excitement stirs the air,up through the trees a redtailed hawk flies searching for his morning meal,a smal grey dove explodes from cover trying in panic to get away. A doe steps into the meadow white tail in the air,behind the tall grass a fawn is hidden waiting for the signal all is clear. Squirrels chase each other up and down the trees,suddenly all freeze as the wolfs call goes searching for his mate. Rabbits bring their families to a clover patch,the beavers start working as if today will be the last,did you hear the otter splash? All is as it should be in a world brought now to peace,all the ugly shadows have sailed away at last,but where are the sons of man?
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sure does sound peaceful. Enjoyed, latearrival |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your beautiful use of imagery took me to a place of serenity. A very lovely write.. the ending leaving much to ponder. Well done..well done indeed.  In the midst of winter, |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sure does sound peaceful. Enjoyed, latearrival Sigi latearrival!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
the ending leaving much to ponder. Well done..well done indeed. Sigi Enchantress,it is my heartfelt hope we will all think hard and well of what is it we lose if we do not make within the changes needed by our Mother Earth! my loving thanks and many blessings!
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
The sons of man have wandered far away. If only there is time for them to wend their way home. And who will show them the way? |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
The sons of man have wandered far away. If only there is time for them to wend their way home. And who will show them the way? O'siyo S. Arthur Gray,it is the same path since time began it is simply for the sons to remember it is the lifegiver/wisdom keeper who holds the key to that path!Until that day returns my brother,respect is a dead word! blessings!
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but where are the sons of man?" Granny you speak volumes in one line... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Granny you speak volumes in one line... Sigi my Lady sister,there is a fear within as I see Prophecies fullfilled daily,that none will awaken to see it is we who must make the changes! blessings!
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Honestly I loved it! Well written! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I love this!made me smile....made me think |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a thoughtful expression of the earth's gifts to mankind M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe we were in each other's minds this morn...absolutely beautiful  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have painted such a lovely, true side of nature and its gifts to those who see, like you...and also me. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi Trutadaraiders my heart is grateful!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi PassingShadows I am most honored you enjoy!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi Nakdthoughts,a thoughtful spirit who sees,what is there to see makes my heart glad!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
I believe we were in each other's minds this morn...absolutely beautiful LeeJ it could be is very possible my sister,those who share beauty share spirits as well! Sigi my sister!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
You have painted such a lovely, true side of nature and its gifts to those who see, like you...and also me. Sigi Martie it is good to know another still sees/feels the wonder of the gifts of both Mother Earth,and Creator! blessings
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If the sons of man had been there it might not have been such a peaceful scene  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
If the sons of man had been there it might not have been such a peaceful scene Siyo Interloper very wise,yes,but sad to think it might be so, that we have not yet learned to value all things and add to the beauty instead of distroy it,eh?
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
And the heart weeps for that which the trees bear witness to and which the earth holds forever. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi Time Prophet for your understanding!
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