Open Poetry #39 |
Star Points of View |
MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Star Points of View" (Star points of You) Quintillion stars or maybe more fill the sky like nights before.. but different now than nights gone by, somehow, this most perfect sky. it looks the same, not rearranged, as when I gazed at it unchanged. Yet now I think it is point of view, when I think you see it too. We see the same stars, you and I... or do we now, as they pass by? Do you see what I see too... or does it differ from me to you? I look and call them by a name. If you do too, is it the same? A point of light, the star you see... is it the same as seen by me? I think and wonder where you are, if we dream on the same star. To know we share this same sky, brings us closer, you and I. Quintillion stars or maybe more fill the sky like nights before.. but different now than nights gone by, somehow, this most perfect sky. [This message has been edited by MoonShadow (12-16-2006 08:50 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Ken! Sing in me muse... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a perfect sky for a perfect poem excellent write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very deep and thought-provoking poem outstanding! |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Beautifully expressed Ken...sooo romantic...so lyrical. That should make her melt for sure! Grandma Bea |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Interloper... Thank you for reading. Nancy... you, above all, who knows me so well.. I am glad you liked this. It makes me smile and glow when I please you so. LeeJ.. Thank you for a purrrrrfectly lovely comment. Passing Shadows... Thank you for passing and pausing... and perhaps pondering provoking passages. Beatrice... I am sooooo glad you liked the lyrical romance (I do so too) and it is my intent to kindle enough to warm if not melt a romantic soul..... soooo welcome to my kitchen.. if you can stand the heat. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but different now than nights gone by, somehow, this most perfect sky" I like the warmth and perfect sky stars in your kitchen MoonShadow |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A seamless sky...and I do believe it is one point of view that is always shared. Nice feel to this write. TD |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love the stars! beautiful write. RDB |
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