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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-15 01:31 AM


Oh her eyes...
Those beautiful, sparkling eyes,
The source of all her passions,
The teller of no lies.

Oh her lips...
Those soft and tender lips,
Where upon the glass of life,
She savours and she sips.

Oh her hair...
Her sunlit golden hair,
That drapes upon her shoulders,
Showing perfection, oh so rare.

Oh her face...
Her stunning, beguiling face,
Where heaven can be sought,
And God can be embraced.

Oh her form...
Her delicate, slender form,
In dreams, beside me lay...
So tender and so warm.

Oh her soul...
Her gentle caring soul,
That longs for love in life,
Yet, life just can’t console.

Oh God, Oh her...
With her imperfections much,
Yet, when I think of love,
It’s her soul I long to touch.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-12-15 08:02 AM


and perhaps you already have

this was beauty in truth

lightkeeper
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since 2006-09-13
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pluto
2 posted 2006-12-15 12:03 PM


When your heart is touched by another, the beauty is echoed and felt by all.
   thankyou

    lightkeeper

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-12-15 12:28 PM


nice!

good to see you!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-17 12:25 PM


wonderfully expressed my sweet Bill!   RDB
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