Open Poetry #39 |
My Soul Hath Flown |
MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"My Soul Hath Flown" My soul hath flown among the clouds and rode the winds above. My spirit rend its earthly shroud, freed by warmth of love. O'er the tops of forest green and mountain peaks I flew. Up to view the sights unseen through the sky so blue. Climbing high and filled with myrth, steady I did plod. Until I broke the bonds of Earth and touched the hand of God. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have taken this flight... The most remarkable journey. Lovely write. Left off the r in her...second verse... I knew who's blue skies though. Good Morning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Other than the spelling, I had trouble with the transition from flying to plodding. Apart from that it was an inspirational write Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
TDiamond..Thank you for the read and letting me know of the typo... could be misleading. Nice to know you have been there too. Interloper... sorry for the need to clarify... sometimes it is a struggle to break free from the chains that bind us to Mundania (Earth).. but if we make the extra effort (though slow and plodding) we can hopefully gain that uplifting breeze (hopefully with the help of a loved one) to carry us aloft to realize a dream or two. Thank you again, so much, for reading my humble renderings. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A gentle similarity to High Flight. http://dnausers.d-n-a.net/dnetrAzQ/prayer.htm Enjoyed! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Very nice. I liked this poem because it hit home all to well. thanks for sharing this poem MoonShadow |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Sunshine... Yes it is.. one that I absolutely love as well. :-) Tru... thank you for reading. MoonShadow |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nicely done MoonShadow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I too have been there... and High Flight is one of most favourite poems. You see, my son is a pilot. Thank you for this keeper Ken. Sing in me muse... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderous! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
passonate write and so beautifully done |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful! RDB |
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