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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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0 posted 2006-12-14 01:48 AM

Can we meet in the twilight or touch in the dark,
Will the passion live on... evermore,
Could our love live eternal - since we embarked,
From an ocean of doubt near a perilous shore.

If those fires of love should fade in our hearts,
Will we each take our turn with love’s fan,
For the course will be hidden... with treacherous parts,
And its length; shall seem double its span.

Though the days may seem gloomy and nightfall brings fear,
It’s our love that will feed both our souls,
When life seems all hazy – the land will appear,
For life is the ship... with love its controls.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-14 02:55 AM

For life is the ship... with love its controls.

yes, love seems to be a very important part of our life doesn't it - we yearn for it, we get it, we abuse it, we lose it ... then we start all over again... nice write and flow to this my sweet Bill

RDB

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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2 posted 2006-12-14 03:18 AM

Many waters have I sailed *lol* and either my ship gets lost or is sunken by cupids brother "evil cupid" who shoots arrows of heartbrokeness. Roniece In my belief I believe that if we where patient, God would lead us to our "Soul Mate." I think we as humans push and shove into a love that was never intended for us. I believe in my heart if I had more faith, and patience that infact I may have never experienced the pain of heartbreak

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2006-12-14 07:33 AM

awesome!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-12-14 08:27 AM

well, if the one this is written for won't meet you, I certainly will...as you had me with the first line, and all throughout...(smiles)just kidding
I love your poetry....

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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5 posted 2006-12-14 02:12 PM

LeeJ *wink* Thank You
Passing Shadows Thank You *smiles*

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