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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2006-12-09 08:59 PM



Winters Before You

Angora pledged redemption, drawn up closer to be warm
Stitching time too tight together, in the shelter of the storm
Deeper in the cold forgotten, shoveled far from my front door
Leaves the drifting snows of winter prose, hardly visited before

Haunting night chimes in the darkness, saunter vastness to affirm
Icy sidewalks, crisp the footpaths of the lessons brought to term
Often falling, as the snowflakes, landing harder than allowed
So the tears that once I’d hidden, are released now right out loud

Without looking too far forward, to the melting times ahead
Just this blizzard of emotions, simmer something to be said
Always near and never farther on the range where wild things roam
In attend of fires burning, deep inside my true heart’s home

O’er the white out of conditions caused perhaps beyond control
Unconditional resilience shines the beacon of the soul
Packed together by the mighty, up above predestined strike
Bowls an avalanche together putting two as one the like

Here before you was a winter, without any thought of spring
What was lost, was found together, deep and more of everything
Under cover or besieged, with not a candle held to light
Yet a new angora promise glows, despite the snow tonight

Copyright Kkh 12/9/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2006-12-11 11:13 AM


Hey Diamond this 1 is going to my hard drive. This was truly a great poem, and I am shocked by the lack of comments. I do have to admit I had to look up Angora. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-12-11 02:02 PM


This belongs on top

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-13 04:54 AM


I agree - back to the top for you   lovely!
RDB

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-12-13 07:28 AM


goodness! I'm speechless!


JL
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5 posted 2006-12-14 02:09 PM


"Here before you was a winter, without any thought of spring
What was lost, was found together, deep and more of everything
Under cover or besieged, with not a candle held to light
Yet a new angora promise glows, despite the snow tonight"

Wow...Wow...
Beautiful.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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