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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-12-13 07:16 AM

I woke today at 3 AM,
quivering lips sighing your name.

Outside,
a whistling wet winter wind whips
a neighbor's discards
from an overturned trash can;
airborne playthings!
Sassy Kat’s wind chimes sing,
whilst tall trees supplicate,
howl in bend, but do not break!

Inside,
a calm serenity prevails,
as I whisper a waterfall of thankful thoughts
to you, for weathering all life’s storms
so that we may merge midstream
in a confluence
of One from two.

I love you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-13 07:23 AM

very romantic

I love it!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-12-13 10:03 AM

1derful!
I love it!
Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2006-12-13 12:54 PM

Outside,

"whistling.....winter wind whips.....

whilst tall trees supplicate,
howl in bend, but do not break!

Inside,

a calm serenity prevails.....
I whisper a waterfall of thankful thoughts
to you....that we may merge midstream
in a confluence of One from two.

Excellent alliteration, imagery, meaning/message content here!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-12-13 12:58 PM

Very beautiful Kacy!
Much enjoyed the read.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-12-13 05:29 PM

thanks! the 3AM muse thanks you too!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-14 03:44 AM

simply lovely! RDB

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2006-12-14 01:13 PM

The warmth is warmer in contrast to the cold outside. Well visualized. And the ending, so simple, speaks loudly.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-12-14 03:49 PM

"of One from two"

your 3am muse
leads you beautifully Kacy

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

9 posted 2006-12-14 04:15 PM

How Sweet..Makes me wish some nice lady would write me a hearfelt poem ): Men like poems and roses every once in awhile 2. Very sweet poem~Bill

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2006-12-15 10:55 AM

thanks for reading and commenting
Bill? especially poetically inclined men

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

11 posted 2006-12-17 11:55 AM

Your "3 AM" is sensory rich and passionate.

Love,
reg

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2006-12-17 11:59 AM

Wow Kacy, this poem is so descriptive and
so in line with the feeling that it gives
the reader. Job well done!

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