Open Poetry #39 |
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Words |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA ![]() |
Words seem only meant to hurt... Seem only meant for pain... Seem only meant to kill the love, That I thought somehow I'd gain. And I thought my words would win you, But my words - whilst purest truth... Seemed lost amongst your memories, Along with dreams lost in my youth. I thought words were meant for beauty, To describe the world I knew, To explain... the love I felt, To explain... my love for you. For the pain your words imparted, And the pain they could exert, Proved I always knew the truth, That words could only hurt. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
words indeed my sweet Bill - can hurt, can love, can comfort, can survive.. enjoyed this write of yours... RDB |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
When you lift and hold someone in high esteem and love, their words falling down upon you from such a height can hurt and kill. Well placed words can comfort and encourage... or can crush and destroy a heart in the blink of an eye. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
So very true. I think in times we forget how powerful our words can impact the lives of other in a negative or postitve way. The expression "think before you speak," should really be implemented more |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Clearly written. The relate of relationships...is the most important part...and the words should always come from a place of love, even in their sharpest truth. Well done. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Sticks and stones May break my bones But words will never harm me. I remember this saying from back in the day, and it's just as untrue as it ever was. Great write. Loved it To thy own self be true |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very true! Well said. ![]() Sing in me muse... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Yes the stick and stones saying is something I will never teach my daughter. Diamond And Enchantress thanks for leaving comments it's always nice to get some feedback |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Words do have power, as you've well expressed. peace~ Reg |
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