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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-08 12:11 PM



Words seem only meant to hurt...
Seem only meant for pain...
Seem only meant to kill the love,
That I thought somehow I'd gain.
And I thought my words would win you,
But my words - whilst purest truth...
Seemed lost amongst your memories,
Along with dreams lost in my youth.
I thought words were meant for beauty,
To describe the world I knew,
To explain... the love I felt,
To explain... my love for you.
For the pain your words imparted,
And the pain they could exert,
Proved I always knew the truth,
That words could only hurt.

© Copyright 2006 Bill Franklin - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-08 02:18 AM


words indeed my sweet Bill - can hurt, can love, can comfort, can survive..
enjoyed this write of yours...  RDB

MoonShadow
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2 posted 2006-12-08 11:04 AM


  When you lift and hold someone in high esteem and love, their words falling down upon you from such a height can hurt and kill.

   Well placed words can comfort and encourage... or can crush and destroy a heart in the blink of an eye.

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2006-12-08 11:13 AM


So very true. I think in times we forget how powerful our words can impact the lives of other in a negative or postitve way. The expression "think before you speak," should really be implemented more
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2006-12-09 09:23 PM


Clearly written.
The relate of relationships...is the most important part...and the words should always come from a place of love, even in their sharpest truth.
Well done.

twinkyfl1
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5 posted 2006-12-15 05:13 PM


Sticks and stones
May break my bones
But words will never harm me.

I remember this saying from back in the day, and it's just as untrue as it ever was.

Great write. Loved it

To thy own self be true

Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-12-15 05:20 PM


So very true!
Well said.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

trutodaraiders
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7 posted 2006-12-15 06:35 PM


Yes the stick and stones saying is something I will never teach my daughter.

Diamond And Enchantress thanks for leaving comments it's always nice to get some feedback

rwood
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8 posted 2006-12-17 12:08 PM


Words do have power, as you've well expressed.

peace~
Reg

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