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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-12 07:14 AM

             "She Is....."

    ...flowing, glowing Angel hair.
    ...loving eyes with face so fair.
    ...all sweet thing so gentle, kind,
    like ice cream castles in my mind.

    ...innocence with soul so pure.
    ...strenth of courage, heart so sure.
    ...all things loving, tender care,
    like warm sunshine in the air.

    ...inspiration for the art.
    ...keeper of my very heart.
    ...all things delicate, loving, fine,
    like my essence, she is ... mine.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-12 07:35 AM

awww....this is precious!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-12-12 03:45 PM

oh my
she's also a very loved lady

delicately beautiful MoonShadow

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-12-12 03:47 PM

How lovely this is...

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2006-12-13 05:08 AM

beautiful.... RDB

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2006-12-13 10:13 AM

Passing Shadows... thank you for passing my way.... Seeing you always makes my day.

The Lady... Yes she is.. Most Beloved in my mind and heart... a veritable inspiration for my art.

Nancy... Thank you for your kind note.. expressing fondness for what I wrote.

RDB... Thank you, Milady for the read.. encrouages, motivates and fuels the need.

Indeed my pleasure to express that which radiates from within.

MoonShadow

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

6 posted 2006-12-13 12:52 PM

Ahh, Lovely words. Good Job

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2006-12-13 01:42 PM

Ooooh, lovely this !!
Placing it gently into my library.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2006-12-13 01:56 PM

GR8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2006-12-13 02:07 PM

I have read this many times, and each was struck by the simple beauty of feeling conveyed. Precious.
TD

Draugluin
Junior Member

since 2006-12-08

Posts 48
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2006-12-13 02:29 PM

This is a very good tribute to a special someone. Good job. On my first read of the poem, at the last line of the first verse I took a small pause and was trying to guess the direction to piece was going to go, I suppose that line "like ice cream castles in my mind" could have opened the way for a sort of sarcastic work...After all, when ice cream hits the mind...it's rather cold and hurts like no pain ever felt before. Good work.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

11 posted 2006-12-13 05:23 PM

Tru... glad you liked it.

NightShade..(such a lovely name).. Place it where you will.. handy for a quick 'warm pick me up smile'.

Int... Thanks for the read.

ThisDiamond... I too enoy rereading to capture again the warm glow felt at its creation.

Drauglin.. interesting impression created for you causing you to pause and ponder. Thank you for the read and the response.

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