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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-12-13 01:15 PM


      Final Chance

Wind-fountains mixing
low slung clouds
where mountains kiss
  the sky
in forests singing
  of seasons spinning
in infinite experiment
and surrender to time....
where winter lightning
whispers in the dark
of human shadows
passing in listless
  stumble
toward the 'way of
  truth'....
that only wilderness
  and love
shall remain the
  'final chance'!

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-12-13 01:58 PM


I do like the way you weave your words, Bruce

Draugluin
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since 2006-12-08
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Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2006-12-13 02:37 PM


Good mix of imagery.
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-12-13 03:55 PM


where winter lightning
whispers in the dark
of human shadows
passing in listless
  stumble
toward the 'way of
  truth'....


now that touches me

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-12-13 05:15 PM


~sigh~ where hand-in-hand we walk,
the shadows of HDT and TJ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2006-12-13 06:18 PM


where winter lightning
whispers in the dark
of human shadows


love winter lightning and can remember a few years ago such a storm...

M

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