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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-09 08:20 AM



old gurkha's line the warriors leather
hollow eyed they guard the winds
that wear serpent skins as gravy
sipping slither under the doors
of the womb of albert's bordello

the gypsy keys jangle their holidays
metal mating teeth and ends
from the hang down snapster
public view of where they have been
and what they will go into

without even soliciting invitations
from the bare backs with manes
and chapstick flavored lipsticks
that parade the blvd in skimpy hems
to flirt the honking benz's brims

before albert gives them nasty candy


daark

scribblenote: gurkha is a cigar,rings are how they are measured,  the warriors leather is a smoking room at albert's shop..there is a magic key ring that has the keys to the cuban boxes in the vault too.  the bare backs with manes are stogie widows that shop the oaks stores and flirt with the bimmer boys before returning to their men and sipping cognac into the evening.

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-12-09 11:29 AM


shhh...tis a secret, but I do enjoy a cognac dipped cigar every now and then..

Enjoyed this buddie.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-12-09 11:59 AM


ms gs...shhhh me too, thanks ms
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-12-09 10:31 PM



and I enjoy my cigar
dipped in a little something stonger
Stranger darlin'

rwood
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4 posted 2006-12-10 01:15 AM


What a Prince that Albert is

And you, still a master of words.

You always paint a picture of all the things behind the scenes and that's what draws me.

hugs and love,
Reg

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2006-12-10 05:55 AM


Mr Dark... thank you I enjoyed the read... so glad you were able to decipher it for me ... being blonde sometimes has it's drawbacks!  RDB
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-12-10 07:55 AM


ladyone, we should smoke something dark sometime, thanks

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mswood, it is good to see you jutting a smile into the afternoon, sleep slick honey to my eyes, thanks


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ms b, mmmmmmm and blond too, I like the image, thanks lady

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