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Until that day of fall apart
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Until that day of fall apart |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Our need for love it never ends But love it fades to only friends And sadly friends then grow apart So sad becomes the loving heart The years go on without a change And no one knows but two Who live within their little worlds And know not what to do Their inner voices question Which direction they should go But through each day the lovers, friends Avoid the truth they know Until that day of fall apart When truth becomes a broken heart Seeking what is tender sweet Hope again for love to meet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rick, this just hit home for me (but I think you knew) thanks for sharing, my friend touched me deeply this morning |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Great poem indeed. thank you for posting this poem |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
What a lovely, deeply personal poem this is...bound to touch everyone's heart. Beautifully expressed. Bea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
sort of hit home right now...thanx!!! kingsangel |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
had to post another reply so I could add this one to my library....thanx again!! kingsangel |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
It's sad that's the way of things in the world for so many. I think growing together is a rare bird these days. I'm so pleased to find you and your words. Big hugs my poet friend. Always, Reg |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Rick, I enjoyed the read thank you for sharing it with us... RDB |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
To you all my friends, we all know how things in life go, sharing parts of it is wonderful with people who care. I see you all here as those people, understanding through experience and love. Thank you all for your replies, each was greatly appreciated and heart felt, the path is much easier to walk with those who understand and care. When only here once, it is hard to know the direction of fate and right. Take care my friends, my you all have good health and a wonderful Christmas. Sincerely Rick |
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