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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-12-08 07:24 AM


you brought your fragile vases
in separate baskets
lest they jiggle and make noises

that would wake a demon
who would willingly devour
the glass of his favorite flavoring

I threw the trip rope down
knowing your high heel vulnerability
and how your legs would look

when assundering above your hips
running upside down on skies
the dangled ends of a rag doll

you shouted love sounds then
like vulgar songs without music
and I appreciated your smile too

as some words made you ache more
than the ones you hurried over
as you requested that special prince

that wouldn't really save you

_______________

daark


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-08 07:34 PM


oooh.... you have a way with words Mr Dark... very nice words here...

I appreciate your smile too!   RDB

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2006-12-08 11:20 PM


everyone loves an ear to ear grin....smiled here again my friend......

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
3 posted 2006-12-09 08:01 AM


ms b, thank you for the smiletouchwave

______________

ms jul, thanks for the eyes ms

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-09 08:06 AM


hmmm.... smiletouchwave!  I like that! thank you Mr Dark for such a cool word! RDB
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-12-09 11:19 AM


smiles look so good on you babe.  Nice, Daark...
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-12-09 12:00 PM


ms gs, thank you for waving ms
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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7 posted 2006-12-09 10:29 PM




Stranger darlin'
some words always cause more ache
than others
and are worth hurrying for

like this...

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-12-10 07:57 AM


thank you ladyone for the eyes and the hurry
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