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Open Poetry #39

Sweeter The Kiss

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2006-12-08 12:21 PM

'Twas heaven I saw when your eyes gaze into mine,
To reflect like the waters… in sweet flowing brook,
And convinced what I glimpsed was an Eden divine,
My soul was in rapture and in awe did I look.

For when parted… our souls together have slept,
And rose like the wing on a warm morning mist,
And my love everlasting… my passion has kept,
But unleashed was my passion with our first gentle kiss.

So poor was my soul for each moment departed,
Still long shall remain… sweet moments as this,
And extended my search - too late was it started,
For sooner the journey… then sweeter the kiss.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-08 02:15 AM

ah lovely! RDB

ShadowLost
Junior Member

since 2001-06-23

Posts 43

2 posted 2006-12-09 12:19 PM

"For when parted… our souls together have slept,
And rose like the wing on a warm morning mist,
And my love everlasting… my passion has kept,
But unleashed was my passion with our first gentle kiss."

Most lovely. Thanks For Sharing.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2006-12-09 12:21 PM

this is perfect once again absolute perfection from you!!!! Take care!! Julie

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