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Your Presence...
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Your Presence... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Your presence is intimidating yet powerful Your strengths are only as strong as your weaknesses When you’re happy your eyes smile in a way that melts my heart When you’re angry with the world it shows I like the way you look when you’re relaxed – those eyes could melt anyone’s heart |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This was riding a wave of love to be seen for miles, enjoyed...thank you.. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Goldenrose ... appreciate your comments RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah...I know that look...seen it many times and wow, it's powerful |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
eyes that melt anyone's heart so loving and lovely Roniece |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such love felt in these words. Nicely done Roniece. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
eyes tell a tall tale. Thank you for posting this poem and sharing it with us~ Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
passing shadows ... thank you The Lady.... thank you Gentle Spirit .... thank you trutodaraiders ... thank you my sweet Bill! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Another great read by you!!! excellent!! kingsangel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... thank you my friend Julie .... you're very sweet thank you for your kind comments RDB |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The look of love...is more powerful than anything I can name. Well done! a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Lunar Raven New Member
since 2006-12-09
Posts 1WA |
Nice writing..powerful  [center]Samhain Light - Literature Community |
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lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
When eyes meet and souls connect for the first time .... There is never a need for words,because the eyes reveal what is in our heart and soul. A lovely write indeed Lightkeeper |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, sounds like your fragile is showing, nice view ms |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
She sounds almost enchanting. Nice. |
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