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Open Poetry #39

There she stands

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

0 posted 2006-09-14 02:19 AM

The she stands
Like a Lady from Troy
The sun at her back
Making her shine.

Looking upon her
My eyes cry
As the light shines from her.

My heart go's out to her
My soul cry's out in love
As I look upon her.

With the light shining
From behind making her glow
Light shining throught her hair.

Now she turns her back on me
Taking the light with her.

She had grab my heart and soul
now she takes them with her
Leaving me a broken man.

As I stand there
Looking unpon her
As she walks away
I cry to the Gods
For her to come back.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2006-09-16 08:05 PM

Some women touch us much more than others...lessons to be learned...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-17 12:07 PM

lots of longing felt here Neotec...

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

3 posted 2006-09-17 01:34 PM

yes i long for her and she knows it thought she not looking at the site

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2006-09-17 02:42 PM

know the feeling of this,too well~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-09-17 04:09 PM

I do believe it would be worth her while to turn around and walk back to you!

ShadowLost
Junior Member

since 2001-06-23

Posts 43

6 posted 2006-12-09 12:16 PM

The visions you leave here are vivid.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

7 posted 2006-12-09 12:20 PM

thsi si B~E~A~UTIFUL...the old adge that you never know what you have 'til it's gone....take care I enjoyed this read...

kingsangel

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