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phoenix rising (a duet with Gentle Spirit)
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phoenix rising (a duet with Gentle Spirit) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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Slow the burn of moth to flame rekindling nest of cinnamon smoldering ash swirls clutching chest phoenix rising breathe, breathing deeply breath fills lungs with fresh air grace climbing from ashes of experience scented in hope. Crackling ghosts burn as white light appears horizon high; gold and red plumage exploring new air beating the sound of day then shall the cry be heard behold! from trodden ash springs life. Vapors of yesterday evaporate as dawn bleeds into the coming day. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, you two did well with this bird's eye view |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Very nice. Thank you for the read |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like this! RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Congratulations to both of you. A well done figure eight. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Stranger darlin’ Donna started it all thank you Bill Roniece thank you very much thank you Sir Sy and thank you gentle Donna for your words and lovely thoughts |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill, thank you so much for stopping in. Roniece, thanks much.  Sir Sey, thanks sweetie, your comments are appreciated always. Lady Kate, thanks so much for taking my words and touching them with such beauty. Hugs you.  |
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