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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It is not when you are there somewhere in Nevada stopping by, to say hi to her, there on the strip, or when you are in her office, waiting there in North Carolina in your hurry to get going somewhere; nowhere fast, nor is it when you are California dreaming walking with her on sandy shores which bothers me; it is when you are not near enough to hear my whispers of good morning that bothers me the most. seek the flame within yourself |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A persoanl and touching write here ..thank you for sharing.. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The ending of this one is so tender, I kinda wanted to melt. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well this is a touching write gentle Donna makes me sad |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
missing the whispers.... wow! this is lovely!! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in a mirror  |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Straight from the heart. Beautiful. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all, I appreciate your time and comments. |
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