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stevepoet
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 46


0 posted 2006-12-05 10:21 PM



My notebook contains sadness
happiness, and struggle
perserverence and trouble,
yearning to be heard,
stories speak of beautiful scenes
containing palm trees and birds
passages echo through life
stopping people on sight
I speak of day and night,carefully constructing every word
then every sentence then every paragraph
flowing smoothly to make you cry and laugh
I try and have some sort of meaning to it all
dreaming is what I call it

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-05 10:29 PM


oh I like this!! RDB  
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2006-12-06 08:43 AM


Nice


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-12-06 12:43 PM


well said!
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
4 posted 2006-12-06 01:01 PM


I dream alot as well...mostly in vivid color....is there such a thing as dreaming too much? is that where confusion comes in?
Sweet dreams and take care...

kingsangel

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