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Open Poetry #39

My Current situation.

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-12-05 05:02 PM

I’ve been broken near the wall,
Standing kind of tall,
But not over.
You had said with all your words
That you loved me and were caring
For my being.
But every time we touch, you're hurt
And I’m distained; you say that we are just friends
And im afraid
That you can’t afford for me
To be something more than just a
Friend to you.
We assume the worst, so the friendship starts to end;
We’re left crying to them all,
That the love was true.
Regretting all the days and ways, that we never got to say,
I love you.

I am the two-toed wanderer

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-05 05:06 PM

I like this poem. It's overview is so similar to 1 that I posted yesterday. A love that is lost; creates another to be gained. Kudos I like your poetry~

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-12-05 10:11 PM

yes Matthew I like your poetry and beautifully written words too

RDB

stevepoet
Junior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 46

3 posted 2006-12-05 10:16 PM

very good.You expressed your meaning well in this poem.

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