Give me thine, thine love complete

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Open Poetry #39

Give me thine, thine love complete

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-12-04 11:04 PM

Help me not in my shallow discovery,
My perplexing eyes confused and jaunted
Back-and-fourth betwixt you.
Ay! Need your advice for whatever I don’t,
For a time mine own hands had seemed
Bereft but all—the beautiful queen:

Yes, now my hands-of-callus-fraught
Hath naught, and aught for I hath thine;
Thy trembleth and quiver so, mine lips doth swell
Exuding love.

I am the two-toed wanderer

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-12-04 11:11 PM

beautifully written and felt...questions asked of love, to live, to learn, to grow on...to become...

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

2 posted 2006-12-04 11:12 PM

to be.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

3 posted 2006-12-04 11:14 PM

emjoyed the read thank you for posting it

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

4 posted 2006-12-04 11:18 PM

any time, i just hope i don't hit a writers block soon.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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