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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-04 11:04 PM



Help me not in my shallow discovery,
My perplexing eyes confused and jaunted
Back-and-fourth betwixt you.
Ay! Need your advice for whatever I don’t,
For a time mine own hands had seemed
Bereft but all—the beautiful queen:

Yes, now my hands-of-callus-fraught
Hath naught, and aught for I hath thine;
Thy trembleth and quiver so, mine lips doth swell
Exuding love.

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-12-04 11:11 PM


beautifully written and felt...questions asked of love, to live, to learn, to grow on...to become...
themute
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2 posted 2006-12-04 11:12 PM


to be.
trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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3 posted 2006-12-04 11:14 PM


emjoyed the read thank you for posting it

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



themute
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4 posted 2006-12-04 11:18 PM


any time, i just hope i don't hit a writers block soon.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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