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Open Poetry #39

Metamorphosis

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-12-04 12:04 PM

      Love-seasons changing

            November

uneasy trees
angry skies
rainless thunder
silent winds
empty rooms
dusty echoes
of lost loves
sleeping

            December

moonlit mountains’
magic mists
dancing winter’s tune
to strains of distant dreams
and sea-bells softly singing
songs of love’s redemption!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-04 12:16 PM

Bruce, I like your words here... well written and beautifully described..

Be well
Roniece

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-12-04 08:30 AM

I especially liked the presentation of this...wonderful transition and rhythm.
A happy feeling stayed with me after reading your fine poem.
TD

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-12-04 05:03 PM

*sigh* dancing in December

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-12-04 05:18 PM

Nice change

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2006-12-04 06:33 PM

Bruce,
This is a poem where each individual will take it as far as they can. Enjoyed

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-12-04 09:58 PM

this reminded me of both sides of love...the pain, and the glory...purity at its finest, with the rite of passage into a further growth together....

marvelous write

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-12-04 10:03 PM

Delightful!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2006-12-04 11:28 PM

Thanks so much, to all of you fine folks for your comments on this 'write'!

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